Writing for love is a pas

Ahh! Where's the next chapter? You can't leave me hangin' like that! I just sat at my computer for almost and hour and read all of the chapters and you ...

Okay, the flashbacks, as said in the title, are painful for her to remember. Oh, and deafwriter, have you ever heard of the R.L Stein books? Usually, in the beginning, ...

It's over. It's so over. Your smell of cheap cologne is nauseating. Your once lovable touch makes my skin crawl. I can't believe I had once loved you. You promised ...

Wow. It's not bad at all. I like the question in it. Your flow was fast paced and even. Easy to read. Very good.

whoa. Keep writing please. You could make this into a novel and get It published. It's awesome!

AHHH! Wher's the 8th chapter? You have to make this into a book. I'm in love. This is soo awesome, it's flat out...AWESOME! Ahh! I'm still geekin out about it. ...

Whoa. This was really dark. I think that you described the definition of black! Your use of words is really very good. The second stanza was my favorite. I think ...

Wow. I hope you keep all of those promises. It's really nice to see this from a guys point of view. It was really well written, but I do agree ...

Fun

Whoa. Aussie kinda summed it up for me, but I don't think you have any errors. I haven't really seen anyone write about this before, so I like it. I ...

Wow. This was really deep. I think it is poetic in it's own, unique way. I liked it. I'm gonna give you a gold star. _WFL_

Oooh. This is so nice in the beggining, then it gets sad. I think I cried. I didn't think that anything sounded cliche, which is good. The flow was even ...

*hehehe* the armpit thing, was freaking hilarious. Everyone got everything that I could see. DON"T take me off of the list thing-mo-bobber. Ever. This story is so touching, it's funny.

Dancing, swirling, twirling, s pinning in a pool of light . Hidden, unknown and concealed, i n the deepest depths of night. Just take out some of the caps and ...

I agree with full force with Nolan. Your piece had something that I haven't seen in a while, good, really good, description. You are extremely talented and I will look ...